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 “ Sorry is the hardest word” Do you find it easy or difficult to apologize to others.  

 

Grammatical errors:

“Sorry is the hardest word” I find it difficult to apologize to others. In my own opinion, there are different kinds of persons in this world so that the characters of people are the main points to decide how difficult it is to apologize to others.

 

  There are some people like the character in the movie. “Tiny Times” that I have seen. She is a wealthy and capable woman, named “Gu Li” . She is very proud of herself and never thinks herself wrong anytime even though she is really wrong at time. She cannot accept herself to say sorry or to set aside her pride to people and admit that she is wrong. Some people like this must find that sorry is the hardest word. They would not say sorry because they take care of their face and pride are more important than anything else.

 

  Some people know they are wrong but they do not have courage to say sorry. Most of these people are easily shamed and timid so that they do not have the courage to take the first step. In addition, they would wait for people to say sorry to them first, before they say sorry. This kind of people admit they are wrong, know they are wrong, know they have to say sorry, but they need more time to prepare and find the correct to say sorry.

 

  Besides, some people are afraid of getting punnishment after they say sorry. Most of these people are children who have make mistakes in school or outside, they would not tell their parents. They are scared that if they say sorry, their parents would know they are wrong and what they do wrong, and must parents would choose to give punishment such as retricting at home, beating ratton. As a consequence, they would not like say sorry.

 

  Exactly! “ Sorry is the hardest word” for most of people in the world. In this situation, people need to change their attitude nowadays to learn how to say sorry at the right time.

 

 

After correction:  

“ Sorry is the hardest word” I have a hard time apologising to other people. Since there are various types of individuals in our world, in my opinion, the key factor determining how tough it is to accept an apology from another person is that person's character. 

 

Some people identify with the movie character. I have seen "Tiny Times" in movies. Gu Li is a successful and able-bodied woman. Even though she frequently makes mistakes, she never considers herself to be incorrect because she is so proud of herself. She is unable to forgive herself or to put aside her pride in front of others and acknowledge her errors. It must be the hardest word for some individuals to say sorry. Because they take care of their appearance and place a premium on pride, they would not apologise.

 

Some people are aware of their mistakes but lack the guts to apologise. The majority of these people are timid and easily chastised, therefore they lack the guts to start. Additionally, before they apologised, they would wait for others to do likewise. These people acknowledge their mistakes, are aware that they need to apologise, and are working to discover the best way to do so. However, they need more time to prepare.

 

In addition, some people worry that when they apologise, they will be punished. The majority of these individuals are kids who have made mistakes at school or elsewhere but chose not to tell their parents. They are afraid that if they apologise, their parents would realise what they did wrong and punish them accordingly by restraining them at home or hitting them. As a result, they would prefer not to apologise. 

 

Exactly! For the majority of individuals in the world, saying "sorry" is the toughest word. People today need to adapt their attitudes in situations in order to learn when to apologise.