Writing Essay - Informal Letter Example 1 (Chinese Independent High School Standard - Senior 1 )- 华文独立中学英文写作范例

 I'm going to post an essay I wrote in high school. I hope I can assist you. 

Question : 
Directed Writing:

Your cousin has been chosen to take part in the National Service Programme and is worried about the benefits of the programme and encourage your cousin to go.

Use the notes to write your letter:

- develop good habits    

- make new friends

- learn hardship skills irresponsibility

- exciting activities

- gain new experiences

- teamwork

- strengthen love of country

- keep fit and healthy

- learn survival skills

- discipline   

Informal  letter: (Original Version) 

 

No.25, Pasar Taman Bukit,

93250, Kuching,

Sarawak. 

23^rd April 2012

 

Dear Bosco,   

 

       How have you been recently? Is your family healthy? Please give them my blessings. Your aunt told my mother last week that you have been chosen to take part in the National Service Programme. In this letter, I would like to tell you the benefits of the programme to encourage you to go.  

 

      Don’t be worry first. Please listen to me carefully and this will allow you to relax. The National Service Programme can help you develop good habits. You will be trained to wake up and sleep early. Therefore, you will be trained to be punctual. Besides that, you can make many new friends there. You can also learn to improve relationship with people you meet.   

 

There are also many good programmes  that will help develop leadership skills and responsibility. Activities such as night trekking, jungle adventure and others help you cultivate attitudes. There are also many exciting activities. You can gain new experiences from those activities and learn teamwork during play other activities.

 

In addition, you can strengthen the love you feel for your country. You can keep your body fit and healthy from survival skills. This can help you  handle yourself  better in times of hardship. Above all, you will learn discipline.

 

There are many benefits in the programme, so don’t be unduly worried about going there. You should be cheerful and happy and look forward to it. Please relax and feel free like a bird. Good luck.

 

 

 

 

Your cousin,

Eileen

Informal  letter: (After Correction) 

No.25, Pasar Taman Bukit,

93250, Kuching,

Sarawak. 

23^rd April 2012

 

Dear Bosco,   

         What have you been up to lately? Is your family in good shape? Please convey my best wishes to them. Last week, your aunt informed my mother that you have been selected to participate in the National Service Program. I'd like to tell you about the program's advantages in this letter to persuade you to attend. 

        Don't be concerned at first. Please pay close attention to what I'm saying so that you can relax. The National Service Program might assist you in forming positive habits. You will be taught to get up and go to bed early. As a result, you will be taught how to be punctual. Aside from that, you can meet a lot of new people there. You can also learn to improve your interactions with new people. 

      There are also other programmes that can assist in the development of leadership and responsibility. Night trekking, jungle adventure, and other activities can help you create positive mindsets. There are numerous fun activities as well. You can obtain new experiences and learn collaboration by participating in those activities.

     Furthermore, you can strengthen your affection for your country. Survival skills can help you keep your body fit and healthy. This can help you deal with difficult situations better. You will, above all, acquire discipline.

     There are numerous advantages to participating in the programme, so don't be afraid to go. You should be positive and enthusiastic about it. Please unwind and fly like a bird. Best wishes.

Your cousin,

Eileen